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06 Prewriting

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Prewriting Chapter Opener

Start-Up Activity

Show videos of animals at play and ask students about what they are seeing:

  • A fawn frolics (leaps from spot to spot, kicking its hooves)

  • A kitten stalks (crouches in pursuit of a string or toy)

  • A puppy fetches (runs to grab something with its mouth)

Ask students why each animal plays in a different way. After hearing their answers, let them know each of these animals is practicing survival skills for adulthood. Deer must be able to leap and kick to avoid predators. Cats must be able to stalk and kill prey. And dogs have been trained by humans for thousands of years to fetch during the hunt. Each of these animals is messing around with skills before they are critical to have.

Let students know that prewriting is just like play. It's a chance to mess around with ideas before they count (before anyone is grading or criticizing them). In that way, prewriting shouldn't feel like a burden. Instead, it should feel like a chance to explore and have fun, getting ready for the seriousness of drafting.

Think About It

“Humanity has advanced, when it has advanced, not because it has been sober, responsible, and cautious, but because it has been playful, rebellious, and immature.”

—Tom Robbins

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Selecting Strategies

The selecting strategies on this page (and the first one on page 41) help students explore general subject areas to find specific topics of interest.

First present clustering. Read the description and walk students through the cluster shown. Then give them a general subject that you have been studying in your class. Have them write it in the center of a piece of paper and circle it. Around the nucleus word, students should write associations and connect them with lines. Students should spend the next 10 minutes creating their clusters. Have each student select at least one topic idea to share with the class.

Next, present freewriting. Emphasize to students that freewriting is not graded. The point is to write as many words as possible about the subject, exploring many different ideas. Tell students that they need to write nonstop for 5 minutes about a subject you will give them, even if they have to write, "I don't know what else to say about ________" over and over until they come up with something else to say about it. Then, give them a subject, start the timer, and get them freewriting! Afterward, give the students about a minute to review their freewriting and select an interesting topic that they discovered. Have students share their topics with the class.

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Listing, the "Basics of Life," and Completing Sentences

Present listing the way you presented clustering and freewriting. After reading the description, provide students a general subject that you have been studying and give them time to list possible topics to write about. Have them each select a topic of interest from their lists and share the idea with the class. Then take a poll by show of hands:

  • Which of you found clustering to be the most helpful strategy for finding a topic?
  • Which of you found freewriting to be the most helpful strategy?
  • Which of you found listing to be most helpful?

Encourage students to use their most helpful strategy next time they need to find a topic, but also to keep the other two approaches in mind.

Then present the Basics of Life Checklist. This strategy starts with general subject areas that students need to connect to an assignment that you give. For example, if you assign students to write about "a needed change in the community," a student could select the subject "education" from the Basics of Life Checklist and create this topic: "Parents need to be more involved in the classroom." After students understand this strategy, have them connect a subject from the checklist to an assignment you give, such as the following:

  • A favorite place to be
  • A career I would want
  • A huge annoyance

Have each student share one of the topics that he or she discovered.

Finally, present completing sentences. After explaining the strategy, have students complete each of the six sentences provided. (You can find more sentence starters on page 45.) Ask students to share interesting topic ideas they came up with.

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Building a File of Writing Ideas

The last two pages provided specific strategies that anyone can use in five minutes or so to come up with a topic idea. This page provides deeper ways that students can transform their thinking to become more aware of their world, their lives, and the people around them—great sources of writing ideas. Use this page to inspire your students to think the way professional writers do.

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Search Sources of Information and Draw a Life Map

In a formal setting, search sources of information is about research and information literacy—both critical academic skills. In an informal setting, though, this advice is actually just about curiosity: wanting to know. Students who foster a sense of wonder about life and seek to understand the world around them will devour sources of information simply as a matter of course.

The second strategy, draw a life map, can help students reflect over their lives, creating a visual narrative of where they have been (and where they may be going). This strategy is especially helpful for discovering topics for personal, reflective, and narrative writing. After presenting this strategy and walking students through the sample, have them create their own life maps. Then have each student share one interesting topic idea from their maps.

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Starting Points for Writing

You needn't lead your students through everything on this page. Just show it to them and encourage them to bookmark it. (They will find even more helpful starting points on the next page.)

When students receive a writing assignment and don't know what to write about, they can turn here. The subjects appear according to the purpose of the assignment: describing, narrating, explaining, and persuading (arguing). Students can choose a general subject (such as "Describing a friend") and narrow it to a specific topic (such as "My friend Matthew"). 

Have students experiment. Ask them to choose three general subjects that interest them, and for each write a specific topic. Then have each student share one specific topic that she or he has discovered.

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Writing Prompts

Encourage students to turn to this page for dozens of starting point for writing. Every student in your class could write to the same prompt, but every response would be unique to the individual. Also, one student could respond to the same prompt multiple times, with different outcomes each time.

Have students select one promising prompt on this page and write a paragraph response, "trying it on for size."

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Gathering Strategies

You'll recognize the first three gathering strategies as methods for finding topics. Let students know that they can use freewriting, listing, and clustering also to gather information about a topic. In fact, they might discover that one strategy works best for topic selection and a different one works best for gathering details. They can experiment by selecting one of the topics they discovered on the last pages and using one of the first three strategies on this page to gather ideas about it.

The latter three gathering strategies all focus on asking questions. Have students select one of the topics they have previously discovered and answer the analyzing questions about it. Then have them choose a different topic and answer the appropriate offbeat questions about it. Finally, have them answer the 5 W's and H about a third topic idea.

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Researching and Talking to Others

This page provides an overview of skills that students need for information and media literacy, listening and speaking, and research. The cross-references under many of these skills lead two whole chapters on the topics. Present this information to students, letting them know they will be using all of these processes to gather details for their formal writing assignments in your class.

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Using Graphic Organizers

Present the graphic organizers on this page as visual representations of different kinds of thought:

After you have presented each graphic organizer and described how it works, have students use an appropriate organizer to sort the details they discovered in their work on page 46.

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Using a Gathering Grid

A gathering grid is a graphic organizer that helps track questions, answers, and sources for research projects. In fact, students who use gathering grids might want to build them in a spreadsheet program, allowing them to be infinitely expanded and recombined.

Lead students through the description of the gathering grid, and discuss with them the example. Then ask them to select one of the topics they have discovered so far this chapter and create a Gathering Grid based upon it.

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Planning Your Writing

This page introduces the planning phase of prewriting.

As students worked through this chapter, they probably started with a general subject and narrowed their thinking to a specific topic. Now they need to narrow the specific topic to a focus that will work for an essay or other short form of writing. Lead students through the process of finding a focus. Then have them select one of the topics that they have gathered details for and use the information to find a focus.

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Organizing the Details

After finding a focus, students are ready to organize the details for their writing. Their old friend, the cluster, shows up as one strategy that works well for classification writing. Remind them of the many other graphic organizers they learned about on page 48. They can pair these up with the organizational patterns listed at the bottom of page 51.

Ask students to take the topic for which they found a focus (on page 50) and use a graphic organizer to arrange supporting details for the focus.

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Using an Outline

Some writers swear by outlines. Others swear at them. Whatever your thought of outlines, they help structure ideas hierarchically, showing main points, supporting details, and individual facts at different levels. They also are very handy for note taking, systematizing information that students read or hear.

Lead students through the topic outline (using phrases for most entries) and the sentence outline (using sentences for all entries). Show how both outlines deal with the same focus and details, though the sentence outline goes into greater depth. Both outlines can also be used as skeletons for structuring an essay. In fact, the sentence outline provides not only the focus statement but also the topic sentences of an essay.

Have students develop one type of outline for the topic that they have focused and organized on the previous pages.

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