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09 Group Advising

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Group Advising Chapter Opener

Start-Up Activity

Ask your class, "When you text a friend of yours, what do you hope happens next?" They will probably say, "I hope my friend replies." Of course! When students write in social media, they are looking for a response from their readers. Why, then, is academic writing so often taught as if no one (except the teacher) will ever read the words?

That's one reason group advising and peer responding are important. Writing is communication. It's not simply producing a document, but rather creating a connection between writer and reader. Group advising gives students an immediate, genuine audience. It also gives them feedback in real time from real readers. This feedback can really help students revise with their readers in mind. Finally, it helps to create a community of writers in your classroom—just as Instagram and Snapchat create communities of writers online.

Think About It

“Good writing is supposed to evoke sensation in the reader—not the fact that it is raining, but the feeling of being rained upon.”

—E. L. Doctorow

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Writing-Group Guidelines

Use these two pages to create constructive writing groups in your classroom. All too often, writing groups provide little helpful feedback ("I like it," "It's okay, I guess," "It's not very good; work harder") or actually become destructive because of the inability of members to offer tactful criticism or the unwillingness of writers to receive it. As you can see, the fault can lie on either side, or both.

Have a volunteer read aloud the first bullet and example. Then indicate what you don't want to hear: "Here's my paper, for what it's worth" or "One of my favorite topics of all time is the Spanish-American War because it is a war that we don't really talk about that much but that expanded U.S. territories in surprising places like for example the Philippines which is where I have a cousin from and my uncle was stationed over there in the Air Force. . . ." Your mocking examples will serve a number of purposes: They will contrast with what you do want to hear, they will make your students laugh, and they will give you a chance to set your expectations about effective and ineffective group interactions.

Present the rest of the bullets on this page in the same fashion.

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The Listener's Role

Present this material as you did the material on page 68: Have a student read each bullet and example, and then provide a contrasting example showing what you don't want. Make sure students understand that you expect them to be constructive during group sessions. Tell students that they need to turn unhelpful comments into helpful ones, as shown in the box at the bottom of the page. 

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Using a Response Sheet

Have students use the response sheet to structure written responses to the work of their peers. Note that the sheet elicits observations, positive comments, and suggestions for improvement. When responders provide neutral and positive feedback as well as (gentle) criticism, writers realize that the reviewers are "on their side" and are just trying to help them improve. Then writers are much more open to listening to and learning from their peers.

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