06 Editing

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Start-Up Activity

Before class, put an obvious smear of makeup on your cheek or nose (or place a large white piece of lint or other obvious distraction on your shirt). Start class as usual and see how long it takes before a student lets you know about the problem. Thank the student and continue talking. See how long it takes for the students to ask you to remove the offending spot. Then say, "It's almost like you can't pay attention to what I'm saying because you are so distracted by this spot."

Of course, that's the whole point. When you have a smudge on your face or a spot on your shirt, no one can focus on anything else. In the same way, a mistake in writing draws all eyes to it, and the ideas get lost. Writers should fix errors for the same reason that people should remove spots from their faces or shirts—so that people can actually hear what they are trying to say.

Think About It

“A friend of mine tells that I talk in shorthand and then smudge it.”

—J. R. R. Tolkien

 

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Common Writing Errors

Use this page to teach students about the 12 most common errors in conventions. By avoiding these errors, students can eliminate a large number of problems from their own writing. For more information about each error, direct students to the pages listed in the cross-references.

Have students search for these errors in a revised draft of their own. Ask them to make changes to improve the conventions in their writing.

You'll find an even more complete list of errors (with cross-references) on page 56.

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Editing in Action

Discuss each correction on this page, asking, "How does this change make the ideas clearer?" Remember that correct conventions help to express ideas. For example, underlining or italicizing "Clintonville Gazette" alerts the reader that this is the name of a publication. Otherwise, the reader might first think that Clintonville is just the name of a place.

Afterward, have students review an edited draft of their own (perhaps the editing they did in response to page 54). Ask them to indicate how each editing change makes the ideas clearer.

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Checklist for Editing

Provide students copies of this checklist to use as they edit their writing. Encourage them to follow the cross-references to more information about any of the rules on this page.

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