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My First Home Run

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Good Personal Narrative

This sample personal narrative shares a memorable moment playing baseball.

Title: My First Home Run

Level: Grade 4, Grade 5

Mode: Narrative Writing

Form: Personal Narrative

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Completed Rubric: My First Home Run Rubric

Blank Rubric: Narrative Rubric

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