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What I Will Do for This Country

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Poor Speech

In this poor inauguration speech, a student projects what he will do for his nation.

Title: What I Will Do for This Country

Level: Grade 11, Grade 12

Mode: Persuasive Writing

Form: Speech

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What I Will Do for This Country

"Ask not what your country can do for you. Ask what you can do for your country." That's what JFK said. Well, I'll tell you waht I can do for this country.

We got a big problem with crime. I'll stop crime by without shooting a gun. I will stop it by shooting cameras. They have cameras watching everythign in England and they hardly have any crime in England. When you know your being watched, your not going to do crimes so much. People say that's big brother. So what? When a criminal is walking toward you, you want a big brother.

We got a big problem with health care. Nobody can afford it. So I'll just make it online. Everybody has a special scale at home that gives there weight and feels there pulse and blood pressure and puts it online. If theres a problem, it takes a picture and puts that online. Then the government has programs that look at everybodies info and finds if they have a disease and what to do. After that, the person gets an appointment with a real doctor that is paid for.

We got a big problem with people being disrespecting. The government is the worst of all. So I'm going to be respecting as president. If congress people are rude, they will have to sit down or go out in the hall until they can cool down. That's the way with reporters to. Everybody just cool down. We don't need disrespect.

Thats what I will do for this country.

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