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Thunderstorm!

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Strong Narrative Paragraph

This third-grade narrative paragraph contains many sensory details and interesting ideas.

Title: Thunderstorm!

Level: Grade 3

Mode: Narrative Writing

Form: Narrative Paragraph

Completed Rubric: Thunderstorm! Rubric

Blank Rubric: Narrative Rubric

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Thunderstorm!

One night last week, we had a thunderstorm! Lightning cracked the black sky. Thunder shook the windows. The rain fell so hard on the desert that the sand was splashing up like little fountains everywhere. We heard a crying sound. It sounded like a sheep going "bah" but they don't live in Oro Valley. Mom looked out the sliding door. On the wall sat a Colorado River toad. It bleated over and over. Mom said it was happy for the rain.

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