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My Trip to the Zoo

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Good Narrative Paragraph

This third-grade narrative paragraph tells about a fun trip.

Title: My Trip to the Zoo

Level: Grade 3

Mode: Narrative Writing

Form: Narrative Paragraph

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Completed Rubric: My Trip to the Zoo Rubric

Blank Rubric: Narrative Rubric

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Student Model

My Trip to the Zoo

Let me tell you about my trip to the zoo. I saw big elephants, little monkeys, and tall jirafs. I could smell good things like popcorn and yucky things like manure. Some animals made loud noises like when I heard a lion roar, and it surprized me. There were lots of people at the zoo, too. It was a fun day. I hope I can go again.

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Level:
Grade 3
Mode:
Narrative Writing
Form:
Narrative Paragraph
Theme:
Animals

Standards Correlations:

The State Standards provide a way to evaluate your students' performance.

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.3.3
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.3.5

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