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Let Us Eat

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Poor Persuasive Essay

This persuasive paper makes the case for snacks in the classroom.

Title: Let Us Eat

Level: Grade 4, Grade 5

Mode: Persuasive Writing

Form: Persuasive Essay

Completed Rubric: Let Us Eat Rubric

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Let Us Eat

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Let Us Eat

We should be able to eat in the classroom because it’s too hard sitting in your seat looking out the window for hours with nothing to eat or nothing to chew. Just think about it. Your looking out and all of a sudden you see a person eating a big red apple or something else and drinking something cold and maybe a lemonade. Your mouth waters. Oh how you wish it was you, so you start wiggling in your seat. Now is this any way to act in school? If we could eat it would be a quite day because our mouths would be full. I’m sure the teachers would like this too. Its also good to learn to share treats, and that’s good, right? So its just plane fun to eat in our school.

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