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Las Vegas

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Poor Personal Narrative

This personal narrative shares details about a family road trip.

Title: Las Vegas

Level: Grade 4, Grade 5

Mode: Narrative Writing

Form: Personal Narrative

Completed Rubric: Las Vegas Rubric

Blank Rubric: Narrative Rubric

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Las Vegas

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Las Vegas

My trip to Las Vegas was grate. We got there and unpacked and went swimming. It was fun. We went to a game room. My mom got 700 tickets on a single game. Then it was time to go to bed. Then we went to a water park. and went on all the rides. We came back and played in the game room again. The next day we cashed in tickets and I got a stuffed bear. Amy got a bear too. My other sister got a bunch of candy. We packed and on the way home we stopped to see some of the sights. It was fun. On the way home we played in the car too. And that was my trip it was good!


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