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The Broken Statue

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Good Personal Narrative

In this personal narrative, a student uses colorful words and strong action verbs to describe a moment of trouble.

Title: The Broken Statue

Level: Grade 4, Grade 5

Mode: Narrative Writing

Form: Personal Narrative

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Completed Rubric: The Broken Statue Rubric

Blank Rubric: Narrative Rubric

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