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Fire Fighter

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Poor Explanatory Essay

In this explanatory essay, a middle school student explains fire fighting.

Title: Fire Fighter

Level: Grade 6, Grade 7, Grade 8

Mode: Explanatory Writing

Form: Explanatory Essay

Completed Rubric: Fire Fighter Rubric

Blank Rubric: Explanatory Rubric

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Fire Fighter

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Fire Fighter

People trust fire fighters with there lives. The fire fighters wear different types of uniforms. They wear a coat and boots, etc. They teach kids about fire safety. The fire fighter provides oxygen for people with difficulty breathing from smoke inhalation.

The fire fighter’s coat is yellow and brown. His boot is black. His coat looks cool. The fire fighter’s coat is big. His boots are big and keep fire from his feet. The fire do not get burn fire fighter because they are always ready for action.

His life style is saving peoples’ lives. the fire fighter’s truck brings things for the fire. Fire fighters are heroes to me. There are important in that is there was a fire they beo n the scene quick. If fire fighters were not available some people would not be alive today.

the fire fighters usually have a dog that is black and white. They are always ready to save peoples’ lives. a lot of houses got burned down as a result of fire. The fire fighters save peoples lives. Some die at the hospital after they got saved by the fire fighter. Some of the fire fighters were sad when some people die at the hospital.

In conclusion, the fire fighter’s job is cool and nice. It great to be a fire fighter. Fire fighter job is important from getting burned in a fire.

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