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The Sled Run

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Strong Personal Narrative

In this narrative essay, a third-grader tells of fun in the snow.

Title: The Sled Run

Level: Grade 3

Mode: Narrative Writing

Form: Personal Narrative

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Completed Rubric: The Sled Run Rubric

Blank Rubric: Narrative Rubric

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The Sled Run
Good:
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Poor:
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Student Model

The Sled Run

One day it snowed like crazy, so school was cancelled. I had Amy over to play, and we decided to go sledding. We started to slide down the hill and race each other to the bottom.

One time we decided to go down together. Amy sat in the front seat, and I sat in the back. We started to go down the hill, but then CRASH! We ran into a bush!

Amy went flying, and I got my feet caught in the bush! Amy looked like a spider caught in its own spider web. I had a lot of fun that day, and I will never forget it!

Rubric

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Level:
Grade 3
Mode:
Narrative Writing
Form:
Personal Narrative
Theme:
FunSeasons

Standards Correlations:

The State Standards provide a way to evaluate your students' performance.

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.3.3
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.3.5

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