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The Person I Want to Be

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Okay Explanatory Essay

This explanatory essay explains why the writer wants to become president.

Title: The Person I Want to Be

Level: Grade 4, Grade 5

Mode: Explanatory Writing

Form: Explanatory Essay

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The Person I Want to Be

The only person I’d ever be interested in being is president, because there’s never been a girl president.

I think it would be neat to be the head of the country, but I would also do it to help others. For example, I’d set up more reserves and laws for endangered animals and try to raise money for homeless shelters, orphanages, (ect.)

I would be glad to only do it for the day though. because I know it would also be hard work.

One thing I would be exited about is living in the White House! I’ve always wondered what it looked like inside but to live there would be awesome!

Even though I would only be a president for one day, I would try to be a good president.

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