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Why Smog Is Bad

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Poor Persuasive Essay

This persuasive paper takes a stand on air pollution.

Title: Why Smog Is Bad

Level: Grade 4, Grade 5

Mode: Persuasive Writing

Form: Persuasive Essay

Completed Rubric: Why Smog is Bad Rubric

Blank Rubric: Argument Rubric

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Why Smog is Bad

I have allergies. If it gets too dusty my chest hurts. If our planet gets any dirtier, then I can’t breath and I’ll go into the hospital. Or I could die.

When people drive cars it makes the air dirty and eats away the atmosfere. When they toss garbage in the lakes ond oceans it kills the animals in them. We should buy electric cars. Then we wouldn’t have to buy such expensive gas. If you think about it, you could ride with other peopel, too.


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