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Please Be Kind

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Good Persuasive Paragraph

This example of second-grade persuasive writing tells people to treat others well.

Title: Please Be Kind

Level: Grade 2

Mode: Persuasive Writing

Form: Persuasive Paragraph

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Completed Rubric: Please Be Kind Rubric

Blank Rubric: Persuasive Rubric

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Student Model

Please Be Kind

Some people are mean. Thats no good. You should be kind. It doesn't cost anything. Pat a person on the sholder. They will feel better and you will also. Then may be they help you when you need it. We can all make the world better. You use to many mussels to frown so turn it up side down. Please be kind. Thank you for your attenshun.

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Level:
Grade 2
Mode:
Persuasive Writing
Form:
Persuasive Paragraph
Theme:
Friends

Standards Correlations:

The State Standards provide a way to evaluate your students' performance.

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.2.1
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.2.5

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