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Poor Explanatory Essay

In this explanatory model, a student gives information about a favorite pet.

Title: Fluffy

Level: Grade 4, Grade 5

Mode: Explanatory Writing

Form: Explanatory Essay

Completed Rubric: Fluffy Rubric

Blank Rubric: Explanatory Rubric

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I am going to tell you about my pet cat Fluffy. The four things are what he eats, what he looks like, wats interesting about him and where he lives.

Fluffy eats cat food, chips and other people food. When I spill milk I go get a towl Fluffy has alredy cleaned it up.

Fluffy looks like a lion but with no main. He also roars like a lion but he has a loud myou. His myou sounds like a roar too.

when Fluffy lies down he looks like a person. But he doesn’t look like me. He needs a toy at night to keep him happy.

Fluffy lives in San Diego California but he also lives with us. He mostly lives with me and Joe in our house.


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