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Writing Descriptions That "Show" Instead of "Tell"
When you write, you can present information in two main ways—through telling and showing. "Telling" gives the reader information; "showing" recreates experience.
TellingYou explain a subject to readers. |
ShowingReaders see, hear, smell, taste, and touch the subject. |
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Our raft approached a set of rapids. They were the biggest challenge we faced. We weren’t sure we would make it. We made it. |
The rumbling grew as our raft bobbed toward the drop in the river. The air moistened and smelled of morning dew. Ahead of us, copper water plunged down a set of boiling rapids, which carved their curving way among jagged cliffs. My mouth went dry with a tang of fear. “Hold on, everybody!” I shouted. |
Your Turn Read the “Showing” example and write down four words or phrases that let you see, hear, smell, taste, or touch.
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