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Writing ■ Creating the First Draft

Beginning ■ The beginning should introduce the two topics in an interesting way and lead up to the thesis statement. Joan began her first draft by introducing some differences between butterflies and moths. Next, she used the formula below to write her thesis statement.

Thesis Statement Formula

Middle ■ After forming your thesis statement, you should write the middle part of your essay following one of the comparison-contrast organization patterns. Joan used the point-by-point organization pattern. Each middle paragraph focused on a different point of comparison between butterflies and moths.

Ending ■ Your ending should leave the reader with something to remember about the topic. You can emphasize a key point, share one more insight, or refer back to the beginning. Joan left the reader with a strong final thought.