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Review Your First Draft 🟪 As you read, listen for parts that need work.

• Add sensory details.
• Use specific action verbs.
• Rewrite problem sentences.
• Reorder details until they have the best impact.

Share Your Writing 🟪 Read your story out loud to one or two classmates. Listen carefully to what your partners say. Revise to make your narrative even better.

Check for Errors 🟪 Make sure all of your sentences are complete and correct. Does each begin with a capital letter and end with a period, an exclamation point, or a question mark? Check for spelling errors. Then write a neat final copy of your story.

Tip

Consider adding a picture. Share your story with classmates and family members.