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Writing a Draft
Dave wrote a first draft about his summer. He focused on sharing ideas and didn’t worry too much about spelling yet.
Beginning I spent last summer at my grandpa’s house. He had just basic TV and no computer. I got bored. I asked him what do you do for fun? He said build models. I said what’s that?
Middle Grandpa showed me his worktable with a model Grand Pree race car he was building. It had for fat rubber tires on a black frame. The driver’s seat was open so you could feel the wind in your hair. I imagined driving that car at Daytona. it would be lowd!