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Writing ■ Developing the First Draft
Beginning ■ In the beginning, spark your reader’s interest in your subject: Ask a thought-provoking question, begin with an intriguing quotation, or establish a scene. Sofia’s beginning focuses on a major achievement in Frida Kahlo’s career.
Middle ■ In the middle, include specific details that help tell your story and answer the 5 W’s (who? what? where? when? and why?). Sofia’s middle paragraphs summarize Frida’s life and focus on three major exhibitions of her artwork.
Ending ■ In the ending, explain one final important detail about your subject and reflect upon the person’s life. Sofia’s ending proposes that Frida had become an art installation in her own exhibit.
Revising ■ and Editing ■ Improving Your Writing
Use the checklist below to revise and edit your biographical story.