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Middle Paragraphs

In the paragraphs that follow, Sasha uses different types of details to support each main point in her essay. In the first paragraph, she shares an anecdote about how she got started.

I owe my love of sewing to my grandmother. I stayed with her for a week during the summer between third and fourth grade. She had a gorgeous jacket of yellow and green Kente cloth, and one day, she caught me trying it on. It was like a gown on me, and the sleeves hung to my knees. Grandma smiled and said, “That’s a very special jacket that my mother gave me. The colors stand for royalty and green gardens.” I told her I wished I could have such a special jacket. She said that we could work together to design and sew my own. By the end of that week, I had my beautiful jacket and a new obsession.

In another paragraph, Sasha provides reasons for her style.

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