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Revising Elaborating with Details

When you review your first draft, make sure that you have included enough details to explain each topic equally. When he revised his essay, the writer added a detail about the mountain bike to make it equal to what he said about the BMX bike.

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Revising Checking for Smoothness

The overall structure or flow of your essay is important. If things move along in a smooth, logical manner, the reader will be able to follow your ideas. Answer these questions.