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Sample Comparison-Contrast Essay
The following essay compares and contrasts two different types of bikes. The student knows quite a bit about both kinds and does a good job of pointing out their important similarities and differences.
Notice how the essay is organized: Each paragraph covers one of the differences between the bikes. This makes the essay easy to follow.
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Beginning
The writer leads up to his focus statement. Not all bikes are created equal. Some kids like BMX bikes best. Other kids prefer mountain bikes. It all depends on how you like to ride. BMX bikes and mountain bikes are different in three key ways.